30 Second Poem…..Embracing Hope

by Jotter girl on February 14, 2012


Leaning into loves lock

Entering ever after entwined

In pure happiness

Devoted to this moment and alive with promise

Envy stands near

A hopeful sigh is heard


{ 3 comments… read them below or add one }

Mary September 30, 2012 at 6:23 pm

Hmmm, this poem seems to hold mixed feelings. Love and envy. I hope that love will ‘trump’ the envy and that it will last! I really love the photo.


Poet Laundry October 1, 2012 at 12:18 pm

A perfect capture…ominous with “Envy stands near” –great personification. And I really like the “hopeful sigh” ending.


Audrey Howitt October 1, 2012 at 12:19 pm

See above–not sure if you get to see my comment –lovely write!


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