30 Second Poem…..Embracing Hope

by Jotter girl on February 14, 2012


http://e17arttrail.co.uk/wp.php Leaning into loves lock

Sīta Road Entering ever after entwined

In pure happiness

Devoted to this moment and alive with promise

Envy stands near

A hopeful sigh is heard


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Mary September 30, 2012 at 6:23 pm

Hmmm, this poem seems to hold mixed feelings. Love and envy. I hope that love will ‘trump’ the envy and that it will last! I really love the photo.


Poet Laundry October 1, 2012 at 12:18 pm

A perfect capture…ominous with “Envy stands near” –great personification. And I really like the “hopeful sigh” ending.


Audrey Howitt October 1, 2012 at 12:19 pm

See above–not sure if you get to see my comment –lovely write!


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